The use of surveillance cameras in public places helps to ensure our safety, What is your opinion of this? Support your position with specific examples.

In many public areas around the world, it is very common the usage of security cameras to provide safety to citizens,
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as main train stations, parking, etc. Studies by experts have proven how reliable is to implement
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system to prevent potential crimes.
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, as far as I am concerned, the protection of our privacy can be broken and it is essential to understand where the limit of
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implementation is. In the
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place, not all security systems are utterly reliable to secure our integrity. It is well-known that most of the cameras installed use one angle and
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, only one version in a crime story can be proven. To illustrate better
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point, many crimes are still unsolved by the jurisprudential system and people claim to not feel protected.
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, since our society agreed to be in a digital world, our privacy is under many enterprise hands, which are constantly using our data to study our behaviour to benefit their bank accounts by selling us products or using videos against us on social media channels. To briefly recap,
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implementation might help to prevent certain crimes, but citizens need to prevent their data by themselves.

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