ome people think it’s better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. Other people believe it’s good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

It is often held that friends are allowed to have opinions in our decisions in life. While some agree that they should
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and agree with you, others believe a true
friend
must always object, as and when necessary.
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and argue in favour of the latter.
Firstly
, it must be taken into account that friends play an extremely vital role in our lives. They
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influence our lives.The famous saying, a man is known by the company he keeps.
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, it could be concluded that their views and opinions can alter
one
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not only a matter of luck
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but
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.Sometimes in life, it becomes difficult for
one
to access his or her
decision
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such
a case, if a
friend
agrees,
one
can establish confidence in the
decision
taken.
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discrepancy
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when my
friend
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found more stability in my path.
Furthermore
, if we discuss a different scenario, where someone is taking a wrong
decision
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friend
doesn't prohibit that,
then
he could not be called a true
friend
.A good
friend
would never allow you to make a mistake. In my personal experience,
one
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with my roommate over space. At
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was really angered at my
friend
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gathered that it was for my own good. In my personal opinion ,
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would suggest that a true
friend
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for the well being of you.
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Therefore
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disagree
, whenever necessary.I strongly persuade people to disagree with your
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friends
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greater loyalty and trust.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • reinforces
  • fosters
  • sense of belonging
  • supportive environment
  • stress-free
  • like-minded
  • personal growth
  • echo chamber effect
  • new perspectives
  • critical thinking
  • personal development
  • healthy debates
  • confrontation
  • opposing views
  • strain the friendship
  • well-rounded social circle
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