Some parents believes that learning mathematics in school is redundant and should mot be taught while others believes that it should remain as a foundation subject whether or not it is used later in life Discuss both sides.

It is widely believed that learning
mathematics
in schools is redundant because there
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no applications in
the
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daliy
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daily
life.
However
, few people would
also
contest that
mathematics
is the foundation
subject
that's why it should be compulsory. In
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we discuss both views. On the one hand, people thought that reformatory maths is absurd because it is not in use.
Moreover
, there are some basic formulas which
exercises
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in school time.
For instance
, (a+b)2=a2+b2+2ab and many other formulas
like
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related to
trignometry
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trigonometry
,
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theory, functions and relations, and
also
many more and there is no utilization of these formulas. So,
that is
the reason why
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consider
mathematics
is absurd in schools.
On the other hand
, many persons and mainly students from technical
background
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believed that
mathematics
is
foundation
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subject
and it should be used later in life
also
. Maths is the
subject
which is
apllied
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applied
in all the areas of application from
contruction
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construction
of building to
manufacturing
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the manufacturing
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of a computer, TV, and many other electronic items.
Furthermore
, whatever technology we see around us it's all
mathematics
.
For example
, when we see our delayed flights on
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the display
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screen of airports it's all handled by the application of
this
subject
like matrices and determinants.
In addition
to
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, when you download any movie
then
also
mathematics
is used to download it. There are many great
mathematician
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who discovered what is infinity, and
value
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of zero, they
also
study
mathematics
in school that's why today we know about their inventions. In conclusion, educating
mathematics
in
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is good from one perspective and not good from
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other
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. We discussed both views in
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