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These days, more and more people are going to other countries for significant periods of time, either to find a job or to study. There are clearly many benefits to doing this, but people who live abroad can also face some difficulties. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of living and working in a foreign country.

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The number of people migrating for many purposes
such
 as finding a job as well as studying are increasing day by day which can have some negative impacts on foreigners. Living in a different
country
 can lead to many advantages as well as disadvantages and
this
 essay will discuss some of them. Foreigners can
first
 be really unlucky with finding
foods
 they usually eat. In their native ,
country
 they are brought up with different morals,
foods
 as well as different situations.
Therefore
,even if u can adjust to the overall environment which is not easy as it is but not getting desired food can be extremely difficult for both body and mind.The biggest example is people who are picky about what they consume can face extreme difficulties with a completely different culture.
In addition
 to that,if anyone is allergic to certain
foods
 they
also
 can come upon some problems if they are not familiar with many areas or
foods
.
On the other hand
, moving to a whole different
country
 can be helpful in order to get a better education or a job.There are many countries where there is a lack of job opportunities or a lack of better institutions.
Furthermore
,moving can easily solve
this
 issue.
For instance
, a student named Sarah who was living in her
country
 where education was not as much as focused on later become one of the most successful doctors in her
country
 which would not
be
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 possible if she did not look for education in a different
country
. To conclude,moving from one's native
country
 can be difficult but the advantages far outways the issues which can be solved easily over time.
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