Although the prices of fuels have greatly increased over the last decade or two, it is argued that further increases in fuel prices are the only way to reduce world consumption of fuel and lessen pressure on the world’s fuel resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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These days

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prices

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going higher and higher each day. Many people believe that the

prices

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of petroleum are overvalued in the past 10 to 20 years.

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, some people argue that

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increase in the rates of

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is the only way to reduce the consumption of it and it would

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help to reduce the pressure on the world's

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reserves. I agree with the

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viewpoint and in the forthcoming ,paragraph I shall discuss my viewpoint.

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fuel

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is one of the essentials for human life and the

prices

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fuel

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increased drastically in the past few decades.

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, a hike in the price of these items will

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be helpful from an environmental perspective because somehow fuels are the reason for the disbalance in our ecosystem.

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, when individuals used these products they emissions carbon dioxide which is quite harmful to the environment.

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, natural resources are limited and consumption of

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had been increasing badly

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if the

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are getting higher

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individuals will be avoided the use of the

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and they would use other alternatives or one's would start using public transportation. It would

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help them to save some extra money and it will help them to save their economy because most of the countries import

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from other nations.

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, there are lots of alternatives available to use

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as electric cars. To summarise, it is the time when individuals should think about the environment and works on alternative solutions.

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, it would

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help them to save their resources.

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Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

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