Children should always follow their parents’ advice. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays, in the period of free rights, more and more charters are issued to entitle t

o m

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ore generations, especially

children

. There are a lot of people who said child n

eed

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to be free in f

amily,

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the family

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it means they should not obey the rules and follow their parent’s

advice

while o

ther

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others

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thinks they should. In my opinion, I completely believe that

children

need to follow their parents’ words We all need to know that all parents want the right things f

ace

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cross t

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heir c

hild.

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children

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Therefore

, they always give

children

some

advice

which sometimes m

ake

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makes

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them feel s

care,

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but always based on their happiness and benefits.

For example

, our parents permit us from candy because it possibly bring some tooth problems, but

instead

of following

this

advice

, we probably eat so much.

Hence

, obeying parents’

advice

is an important thing w

hich

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that

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a

ffect

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affects

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children

l

ife

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p

ositive

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consequences.

Furthermore

,

children

i

s

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so young to know what they have to do or what they can do, so

advice

from their parent can hold them on courtesy and keep them apart from d

isobey.

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disobeying

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When we were an infant, we did not know anything,

then

we became a toddler, we

also

followed our p

arent

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parents

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such

as what we h

ave

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to eat, the amount of milk we drink or the sleeping time, and those were efficient, so it is no reason to don’t obey parents until eighteen. The duality above between parents’ view and their child perspective indicates an evident demonstration that

children

have to follow their parent’s

advice

constantly, it will give them a perfect childhood and growing up on a cheerful life.