You have been invited to attend an interview for a place studying a course in a college. Unfortunately, because of a previous appointment, you cannot come at the time they wish. Write a letter to the admissions tutor: explain your position apologise and offer to come on another day or later the same day. ask how long the interview will be and whether there will be any tests during it. You should write at least 150 words.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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letter to inform you that I will miss our meeting for the tutoring class that I am applying to in your reputable institute. My name is Ali Hammoud, and I am currently a civil engineer in a construction company called MS technology. In fact, my supervisor demanded from I to conduct a presentation about a new project owned by a wealthy client.

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, I will have a business dinner with several potential contracting firms where my manager asked me to choose the most relevant for our requirements. Unfortunately, I would deeply apologize for

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inconvenience in my working schedule for the

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week.

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, I am kindly requesting your permission to attend our interview on Saturday, the 17th of May at the time that you will decide.

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, I would to be informed about the period of

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reunion in order to well-organize my time

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day.

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to that, there are any possible written exams that I must prepare before attending our interview. Your prompt action is highly appreciated. Yours faithfully, Mr Ali Hammoud

eng.ali.hammoud.26Sun Jan 09 2022

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

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8 paragraphs

186 words

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