You have seen an advertisement for a part-time job at a local music shop and decided to apply for the post. Write your letter of application

Dear Sir,
letter to apply for the position of a part job I saw an advertisement in yesterday’s local newspaper.
17 old years and I am currently studying Information technology and Informatics at primary school Aviator “Hristo Toprakchiev”. I speak intermediate English and
speak a little Spanish. I haven’t done anything like
before, but I have experience with communicating with people because I was involved in a podcast project and I met a lot of people
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I interviewed.
sure that I will be great in
job because I am enthusiastic, creative, energetic and I love music.
very patient and communicative with people, and I believe my skills will be a valuable asset to your music shop. I want to meet for an interview. I may be reached anytime at [email protected] and my telephone number is 088294181.
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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