You have seen an advertisement for a part-time job at a local music shop and decided to apply for the post. Write your letter of application

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Dear Sir,

I’m

writing

this

letter to apply for the position of a part job I saw an advertisement in yesterday’s local newspaper.

I’m

17 old years and I am currently studying Information technology and Informatics at primary school Aviator “Hristo Toprakchiev”. I speak intermediate English and

also

speak a little Spanish. I haven’t done anything like

this

before, but I have experience with communicating with people because I was involved in a podcast project and I met a lot of people

whose

Correct pronoun usage

whom

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I interviewed.

I’m

sure that I will be great in

this

job because I am enthusiastic, creative, energetic and I love music.

I’m

also

very patient and communicative with people, and I believe my skills will be a valuable asset to your music shop. I want to meet for an interview. I may be reached anytime at [email protected] and my telephone number is 088294181.

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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2Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Grammar mistakes
 

5 paragraphs

147 words

5.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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The Closing

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