A government has a responsibility to its citizens to ensure their safety. Therefore, some people think that the government should increase spending on defense but spend less on social benefits. To what extent do you agreee?

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statement is not in accord with my belief, as social benefits are more important for the citizens than military forces and strategies for

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made by the

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. The reason being is that individuals need a society where they are taken care of in terms of health and basic life support and

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more important than

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strategies initiated by the

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as these are not often necessary. There are many people that struggle with their finances, as they have a disability and are not able to work, are severely ill, or struggle to find work for a living. It is

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mandatory that the

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cover their basic needs in terms of food, clothes, a place to stay, and that they get medical help when required. In Scandinavian countries, the

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make sure their populations have a generous health system that covers medical help regardless of the individual’s income.

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social benefits are fundamental for people, some countries choose to increase

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on the army,

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strategies that they claim are important to maintain safety for their inhabitants.

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, using the

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for military purposes is expensive and often not beneficial to the citizens.

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, in China, a huge amount of the state’s resources are being spent on military purposes as they claim

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is important for keeping the Chinese secure. In reality, the Chinese do not see any advantage in terms of safety by

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strategy,

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for them, using

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on

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is a waste. To conclude, I do not agree that the ministry should use a substantial amount of

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on

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mechanisms rather than social benefits as people’s basic needs must be covered

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of all and resources spend on military purposes are not always an efficient way of spending the

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