These days, in many countries fewer and fewer people want to become teachers, particularly in secondary schools. What are reasons for this and how could the problem be solved?

Teaching is a noble
profession
. But at present, people are not considering
this
as a career opportunity and in many parts of the
world
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there is a sharp reduction in the young generation who want to become
teachers
for primary or secondary level. In
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we will discuss the reasons and some proposed solutions for
this
issue. One of the main reasons for
this
is the lower
salary
of
teachers
with respect to other professions. There is not a fixed
salary
slab for any secondary level educator as well as there is not any clear increment policy for them, but for other professionals like, Engineers, doctors accountants, etc, they get a better
salary
structure with
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increment policy which leads to higher earning for these professionals than the
teachers
with the same years of experience.
Solution
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for
this
problem is, the government needs to raise the
salary
for
teachers
by a significant amount, which will attract more people
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this
profession
. Another problem is that students do not behave well in the class.
That is
to say,
teachers
often have to deal with
this
type of student and that makes them leave their job. To tackle
this
issue, the
misbehavior
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of students with
teachers
should be considered as a serious
offense
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and the administration should take strict action about it as well as there should be
accountability
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of parents
also
. The
third
cause of
this
problem is the workload of
teachers
. Apart from teaching the
teachers
usually have a huge
workpressur
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work pressure
like notes preparation, Exam marking, etc. By
this
, the
profession
became
mentelly
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mentally
as well as physically demanding.
As a
result
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it makes a bad impact on their personal life.
This
issue can be redeemed by providing assistants or by reducing the working hours of
teachers
. To sum up, teaching is a less popular job these days across the world because of some issues like, lower
salary
, huge workload and
misbehavior
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of students but these problems should be resolved as
teachers
are the most important part of our life.
This
is my firm belief that the government and school administration can provide the solutions for these concerns and
this
can be a very popular
profession
among the youngsters.
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