You have recently started work in a new company. Write a letter to an English speaking friend. In your letter explain why you changed jobs describe your new job tell him/her your other news.

Dear Rossi, I hope you are healthy and safe. Today I am writing
letter to inform you that, I have switched my job to another organisation
, I want to share reasons behind
. To embark with, as you know earlier I worked in a private company as an accountant.
In addition
, I had to work hard and my colleagues were not Cooperative.
, I had to do overtime without any paying money. Not only at the office but
at home I had to do work. It was really a difficult task for me.
, currently, I am doing a job in a private bank, as a manager post. Though it has many responsibilities, I am very happy with my present profession as it is related to my academic background. I think I will do better in
Sector. I will not leave any stone unturned to get success.
, my colleagues are very well behaved and they are not egoistic. I am very excited about my work. It was my dream, that I will do a job in a bank. Over and above, my parents
feel proud of me. I am feeling like I am over the moon. I hope you will feel delighted by seeing my progress. Hope to see you soon. No more today, please visit my place if you can. With regards, Zannatul Firdaus
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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