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in their advertising business nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in someway why is this?do you think it is a positive or negative developement?

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Currently, business owners often claim that their
products
 are new in some aspects in their advertisements.
This
 is mainly because they want to draw attention from their
customers
. From my
perspective
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 it is many reasons to do it and
this
 offers some negative development to
customers
. There are many reasons that companies insist that their
products
 are new.
Firstly
, they do their best to increase the sales to meet the needs of the
people
 and that they are looking for new things and new technologies and
also
 the world is evolving day by day.
Secondly
, they introduce their
products
 they are using all social
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medias
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 and social networks to introduce their
products
 and promote their brand. Despite positive trends, it
also
 has some demerits.
To begin
 with, when companies
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 all social networks to introduce and promote their
products
 it causes annoyance to
people
 who do not need it or that are not suitable for children it
leads
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 them astray. The other negative reason is that
,
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 some advertisements are false and they abuse the trust of the
people
 and
customers
thus
 it often causes huge financial losses. As an example, you see an amazing
smart watch
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although
 you do not need it you buy that because you think it is
newer
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 model than your own after you
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 that new watch you see it is like your
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previous
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pervious
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previous
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 watch so you’ve wasted your money and they abuse your trust. In conclusion, many companies are trying to introduce their
products
 as a new thing.
this
 action sometimes can cause annoyance
people
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 or abuse the trust of their
customers
.
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