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Many people think that some individuals are naturally good leaders. Other think that people can learn leadership skills. Discuss both views and give your own opion.

#people #individuals #leaders #leadership #skills #opion
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Most
people
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 believe that a particular human has born
leadership
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 qualities, while others claim that
people
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 have the ability to study
leadership
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skills
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. Here I am going to discuss how
students
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 gain
management
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skills
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 from school onwards and every kid is not as same and they need to learn to get things better.
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 of all, Nowadays many schools teach their
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 about
leadership
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skills
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.
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 makes pupils learn about verities of
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 when their studying at school,
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 when they passed out of the school
students
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 have different
skills
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 which they can naturally expand to
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 stage of their life.
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, many schools have personal development as a subject, in which they teach all kind of development
skills
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 to the
students
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, because of
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 many youngsters nowadays have natural in build
leadership
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skills
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.
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, everyone is not the same as others when they are growing. nowadays in
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world
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 a person can study anything they want, because everything in fingertips,
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 learn new
skills
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 and can develop individuals wants.
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, In many places IT
salesperson
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salespeople
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 study Business
Management
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 to learn
management
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skills
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 to manage their own business.
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 clearly shows
people
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also
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 can be taught
skills
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 and become managers. In conclusion, most of the education providers teach
students
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 which they can develop in the future, while some individual wants to learn
leadership
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skills
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. In my
opinion
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people
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 nowadays has
thire
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their
there
 own
management
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skills
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 while their growing up, so our society developed in
way
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 that teaches all the
skills
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.
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