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University students are increasingly studying abroad as part of their studies. Do the advantages of studying outweigh the disadvantages?

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Most university
students
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 routinely study in other institutes around the world as part of their degrees.
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students
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 will often struggle with cultural and linguistic challenges while abroad, they will
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 gain significant life
experiences
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 that will reward them later on in their careers. In my opinion,
students
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 are far better off having studied in a different country despite the challenges that they will inevitably face. The greatest benefit of studying abroad is that
students
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 will have life
experiences
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 that will improve themselves as
people
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 that would have been
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 impossible if they had only studied in their own countries. Being in another country requires
people
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 to push themselves beyond the norm into unusually difficult
experiences
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.
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, when I studied in Indonesia and India as a twenty-year-old, I was continually pushed out of my comfort zone into psychological states that were unique and novel and that I had to adapt no matter what. These ultra-challenging
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 are paradoxically the main advantage of studying overseas because they make you grow as a person. The main challenges that
students
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 will face while overseas will usually stem from cultural and linguistic differences. These differences can pose massive obstacles for
people
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 because they require one to move beyond the familiar and into the unknown which can often be awkward and quite scary.
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, while studying in Indonesia I had to frequently make a fool of myself in order to communicate with the local
people
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 in their language. Oftentimes, I felt embarrassed and I longed to speak English and be in the familiarity of my own culture. Studying overseas has become incredibly common. While
students
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 will no doubt experience social and language barriers, it is in fact that these barriers lead to the main advantage of studying abroad which is personal growth. As a contradiction of sorts, it is the hardship that ultimately makes the experience of studying abroad more advantageous than disadvantageous.
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