In some areas in the US, a ‘curfew’ is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night, unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion about this?

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I completely agree

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teenagers

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since

teenagers

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most rebellious stage of their

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strict to impose a curfew for

teenagers

. I think it is much safer to prevent them from doing things that they will regret for the rest of their

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we do not want our children to end up messing with their

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because of the small stupid things they did during their teenage years. And I think as they grow older,

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they will realize the reason for the curfew.

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, it is not that they are not fully allowed to go out at night. They still can do that as long as there is an adult accompanying them.

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it is to make sure that they do not do something stupid

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because there will be an adult there

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over them. To sum up, I see

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prevention for

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I see

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as a very good thing and fully supports it.

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