In the future, nobody wiil buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Technology has changed our lives.
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people
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can know whole world news through the internet and online.
therefore
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people
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will prefer to use the internet rather than printed things
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as newspapers, books.I strongly agree with
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of all, the significant advantage of online
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people
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can easily get news and it's very comfortable and convenient for folks.for ,instance in Thailand students has to study 7 subjects every day ,
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they may get many pains arms.so if they study
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online they can reduce that as wells as it is a good way to students interesting
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like animation, online presentation
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, there are some drawbacks in online, impact coverage is very important to through the online
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so village peoples couldn't get online news.whereas low technology ,knowledge
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can't understand these
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In conclusion,
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some disadvantage in online, it's has several benefits I think that majority of
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will prefer online
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