Some people say that art subjects such as music, drama and creative writing are an essential part of education, and every school should include them in its syllabus. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your opinion and examples from your own experience

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.So some people want that education department should allow the

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definitely beneficial in many ways.

To begin

with, having extracurricular

subjects

such

as

arts

, drama and creative writing in the

syllabus

helps

students

enormously.

This

is because when

students

learn these courses, it enables them to develop their creative, thinking and imaginative skills, which are beneficial for learning academic

subjects

.

For instance

, it is easier for a student with higher imagination capabilities to solve a complex mathematics problem.

Additionally

, some children are blessed with artistic skills so these classes will give them a platform where they can develop these abilities

further

and perfect them. Another benefit of having

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in the

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is that it alleviates the academic pressure on children. These

subjects

give

students

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break from their regular academic curriculum. Undoubtedly, competition among

students

has increased which can sometimes lead to stress.

Therefore

, it has become imperative for both schools and parents to let children spend some time doing activities which can give them a chance to relax their mind and body. For

this

reason, many schools have already included

such

subjects

as part of their

syllabus

. If,

however

,

students

are not given

this

break, it will become difficult for them to stay focused, motivated and enthusiastic in other

subjects

because of stress. To conclude, including

arts

, drama and creative writing in

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curriculum will help

students

to reap rich benefits by strengthening their thinking power and relaxing their

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;

therefore

, they should be made a mandatory part of

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syllabus

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