Youth crime is increasing rapidly in many countries. Why it is increasing? and what solution can be taken to resolve the problem.

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been rapidly

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in a lot of nations.

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to find out the reasons

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for solving

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as friendships, leisure activities and financial problems, which could be solved by proper education and

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over

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responsibilities. There are reasons for

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increasing rate, including

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of job opportunities among young adults, especially fresh

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.

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, if a newly graduated person does not find a vocation, he would do thievery to overcome some financial issues.

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, playing violent video games

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as Pubg, Fortnight and Call of Duties in their leisure time, would affect their unconscious

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their behaviour.

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, the circle of friendship plays a key role in youngsters' character. Some youth,

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, would do delinquency just to remain as a group member which could be triggered by excitement.

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, some solutions could be considered as a remedy for these states. First of all, education has a major impact on teenagers' future and young adults.

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, teaching practical skills

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as painting or construction in schools and universities simultaneous with meetings with

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ex-prisoners as a live show of criminal consequences could lead them to a proper future far away from crimes.

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, authorities should improve job opportunities by supporting entrepreneurs, local businesses and so on which

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new employees.

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but not least, reinforcing family relationships through free workshops, TV shows and so on would lead young people toward better decisions.

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, the important issue

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increasing

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youth crime rate would be controlled, if governments and society

itself

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cooperate to enhance economic and social situations.