In some area of the US, a curfew is imposed in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your own opinion about this?

The administration levied strict
rule
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in a few demographic
location
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of
United
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States; vide which they restrict the night outing for adolescents after
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time. They are permitted to go out in presence of adult members.
This
restriction has both
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positive and negative
impact
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on
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teenagers. I strongly support
this
rule.
This
essay discusses not only the positive sides but
also
the dark sides of the same. To start with, students of the
age
group
ranging from ten to twenty are supposed to work hard for a bright future;
such
rules may play an imperative role
to
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induce them more into
studies
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. The
first
cogent supporting reason is, children, having not much scope to roam around in the late evening hours, will study as a compulsion.
Moreover
, children, of the
age
group
thirteen to nineteen, are much vulnerable to
become
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addicted to any
sorts
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of bad habits. In a survey, it has been seen, those who are free to wander in the evening with their peer
group
chance of becoming addicted to drugs is much more than
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are
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not permitted.
On the contrary
, teenagers are not allowed to enjoy the evening sky or a
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quite
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place at late hours. They might not experience the joy of having fun with
the
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school friends at the bank of
river
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on a moonlight night.
Furthermore
, the skill of managing the situation in case of urgency may be hard to grasp.
Although
all these types of
skill
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may be inculcated
in
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later
age
, the time and ambition which are ruined can never be revived.
This
is why
such
a rule is required. To conclude, from the above arguments and example it is vividly clear that
such
law
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is preventing a certain
age
group
from indulging in
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the wrong
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track. The bad influence of peer
group
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is reduced to a great extent as
dark
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hours job target is abolished.
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