Write a letter to the manager of a cinema (movie theatre) about a jacket you have left behind after a film. In your letter: Describe the jacket Describe where you were seated Explain what you want to be done

Dear Sir/ Madam
This
is
sahar
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Sahar

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Mokhtari, one of the
audience
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audiences

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of your cinema who attended watching a "Good Old day" on Monday, January 2nd. I am writing a letter to inform you regarding an item of clothing I have left behind in the movie theatre. Yesterday, when I got back home from the cinema hall, I noticed that I had not had my
jacket
with me and I realized that I have most probably lost it when I was watching a movie. It is a brown leather
jacket
with two straight zippers on the front and there is a small rip, almost
unnoticible
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unnoticeable

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, on the left sleeve. I imagine I am likely to have left the
jacket
where I was sitting in
light
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the light

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of the fact that I distinctly recall taking it off because the venue was too sizzling compared to
outside
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the outside

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temperature. As far as I remember, my seat was in row 24 B;
however
, since I threw my ticket out right after leaving the place, I am not able to clear out my seat number. I,
nonetheless
, am assured of having been seated somewhere in the vicinity of the middle passage between the left and
right wing
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right-wing

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of the hall. I would immensely appreciate it if you can locate my
jacket
and either send it to my address which will be written in the footnote of
this
letter, or let me know so that I can pick it up on Thursday on my way back home. I am looking forward to your response. Kind Regards Sahar Mokhtari
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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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