universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In
this
day and age men and women should be allowed equal opportunities in every sector of life. In support of this
argument, some people argue that university is nowadays should admit same
quantities of girls and boys in all courses, while others claim that eligibility should only be based on qualificationsCorrect article usage
the same
,
and not Remove the comma
apply
gender
. I’m strongly in favour of the latter.
First
and foremost, education is an area that must remain unbiased. When an
university Change the article
a
open
its application portal, it should accept application from everyone. Sometimes, it might occur that there are more applications from the female candidates as compared to the men. Change the verb form
opens
However
, after assessing, it was found that the masculine gender
is more deserving. Therefore
, all seats must be given to the guys. In my personal experience for example
, while applying for my first
masters
degree I found out that the ratio of male to female students was 2 is to 4. Change to a genitive case
master's
Hence
, one can infer that the feminine gender
was predominant due to their superiority of knowledge.
Furthermore
, certain university degree
are sometimes more preferred or are more suitable for one of the Fix the agreement mistake
degrees
gender
than the other. Change to a plural noun
genders
For instance
, I have read a survey where the girls enjoyed studying biology more than the boys. Consequently
, the same girls also
wish to study biology in their bachelors. Hence
, the number of applications increased when these students applied to an institution. Eventually, the admission number increased considerably for the female in this
particular subject course biology.
Finally
, taking everything into consideration, it is important to keep educational institutions such
as universities unbiased former end to give Correct your spelling
fair
fare
chances to everyone. Correct your spelling
fair
However
, it must also
be kept in mind that in areas where women have not been given equal opportunities in the past years, are more encouraged.Submitted by madhushreeroy68 on
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