‘Everybody should donate a fixed amount of their income to support charity.’ How far do you share this viewpoint?

As a component of society, people ought to give some part of their earnings for the sake of

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help. Personally, I do not feel that the sheer cost of living,

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or loans

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for various reasons

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impractical aspiration, no matter how much we might admire the idea. The main obstacle would appear to be the numbers of middle class, which

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two-thirds of the world population of those who are living on a budget,

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barely meet their needs. Especially in less developed countries

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as Bangladesh, the tax burden on workers becomes intolerably high, and

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can

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to

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an increase

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in the

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cost of living. A

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issue relates to the loans

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taken out for numerous

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purposes

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, which is

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one of the problems that almost everyone has.

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, if someone has a mortgage, a certain amount of money is deducted from their monthly salary; meaning that it will lessen one’s income.

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final point against

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proposal is

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donations

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could deviate from

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goal.

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means that many people have a

saving

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savings

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for a specific purpose like

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travelling

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, education, or health issues, and

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donations

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could become a pressure to achieve

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goal. I do appreciate that some people think differently, saying that contributing to

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is a worthy ambition for a country to have.

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,

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aspiration suffers significantly when confronted with financial reality. In summary, it seems that

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, loans are the main cause of donating earnings to

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.

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, money is not the only way to support

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;

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needs to be supplemented

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various types,

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as

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the donation

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of blood,

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organs

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and old clothing.