Parents want to achieve balance between family and career but only a few manage to achieve it.What do you think is the reason?Discuss possible solutions and provide examples.

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for themselves as well as for the family. Some individuals try to manage
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between family and
work
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but only some are able to do that.The main reason behind
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is competition. The following paragraphs will explain the cause and some solutions.
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with, in
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technological era , parents job round the clock to earn
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because in
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modern era school fees are too high and
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, kids go to tutors after school
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their games of other leisure activities expenses. For all them of ,that they
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hard, to give their children a good education and a bright future.On the other, when they
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so much they don'
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get
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for
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their
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youngsters.They come home stressed and tired from their jobs and didn'
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get hours to spend with their
families
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.Sometimes,some people move from
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their
other
cities for
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their
career and jobs and are not able to see their
families
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for months and are unable to take them with them.
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, movie stars , don'
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get
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for their
families
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. They have caretakers because they are always busy shooting and not able to take
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their
families
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with them always.
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, it is true that
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is
money
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but
money
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cannot buy a family. For whom person
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, for their loved ones.But if they are not getting
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nothing matters. Parents should choose a career but they should
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look for their
families
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. They should have some
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free .
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, they can have weekends free so that on that day's schools are
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closed and kids are free so that they should plan some
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for
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their
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infants and parents.
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, the government should close everything on festivals so that immigrants can
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enjoy their family
time
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. To conclude,
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is
money
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but
money
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cannot buy happiness and family ones
time
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lost it never come back so apart from their jobs everyone should enjoy
time
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for their loved ones.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • work-life balance
  • time management
  • support systems
  • childcare
  • traditional gender roles
  • societal expectations
  • financial stability
  • flexible working hours
  • remote work options
  • burnout
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