Today more people are overweight than ever before. What in your opinion are the primary causes of this? What measures can be taken to overcome this epidemic

People
nowadays are more obese than ever before.in
this
essay I will discuss
about
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the reason and solution to
this
problem
. it is obvious that obesity is in
people
are complicated.
Firstly
,these days
people
eat a lot of fast
food
in their life which
have
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led them to overweight. for ,Instance
people
are busier
then
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ever before they go for a job early in the morning and come back home at late night from the workplace.so
instead
of cooking , they buy
food
from outside and some of them try to save money
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therefore
they buy cheap
food
such
as burger, hot dog and other fast foods.the solution is for the company to decrease the duty
time
of the
people
of those who don't have
time
to cook their own meal at home , which would allow
people
to make healthy
food
for themselves. Another
problem
is that
,
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most of the
people
are started their life to living in cities
besides
in the village.
That is
to say,
people
often have to deal with the exercise places
such
as tracks, Playing ground for civilians,and even more.which often cause them to overweight because they do not
to
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play games
such
as football,cricket etc and mostly they feel to lack to trails for running and walking.Which forces them to lie down in the bed after the meal and
also
in the morning running
time
.to tackle
this
issue, cities mayor must be built a running track for
people
and
also
run an obesity campaign. a
third
cause of the
problem
is that
people
get those products which have a lot of fat ingredients.most
people
eat sweets and
purchases
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them easily without any restriction. which mean that they have complete freedom to buy and eat everything. to handle
this
issue will be that the government need to increase the tax on unhealthy
food
so
people
find
too
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hard to buy. To sum up, obesity has become much more in many countries
people
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.due to reasons
such
as eating fast
food
and do not have to
time
to exercise .
This
is a serious
problem
, and unless we don't stop
to eat
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fast
food
and
do
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some physical activities.
people
will suffer from fatness.My view is that the main responsibility for solving the
problem
lies with the
people
and government.
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