Today more people are overweight than ever before. What in your opinion are the primary causes of this? What measures can be taken to overcome this epidemic

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nowadays are more obese than ever before.in

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the reason and solution to

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problem

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. it is obvious that obesity is in

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are complicated.

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,these days

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eat a lot of fast

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in their life which

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led them to overweight. for ,Instance

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are busier

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ever before they go for a job early in the morning and come back home at late night from the workplace.so

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of cooking , they buy

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from outside and some of them try to save money

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they buy cheap

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such

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as burger, hot dog and other fast foods.the solution is for the company to decrease the duty

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of the

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of those who don't have

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to cook their own meal at home , which would allow

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to make healthy

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for themselves. Another

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is that

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most of the

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are started their life to living in cities

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in the village.

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to say,

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often have to deal with the exercise places

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as tracks, Playing ground for civilians,and even more.which often cause them to overweight because they do not

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play games

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as football,cricket etc and mostly they feel to lack to trails for running and walking.Which forces them to lie down in the bed after the meal and

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in the morning running

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.to tackle

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issue, cities mayor must be built a running track for

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and

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run an obesity campaign. a

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cause of the

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is that

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get those products which have a lot of fat ingredients.most

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eat sweets and

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them easily without any restriction. which mean that they have complete freedom to buy and eat everything. to handle

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issue will be that the government need to increase the tax on unhealthy

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so

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find

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hard to buy. To sum up, obesity has become much more in many countries

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.due to reasons

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as eating fast

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and do not have to

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to exercise .

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is a serious

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, and unless we don't stop

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fast

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and

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some physical activities.

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will suffer from fatness.My view is that the main responsibility for solving the

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lies with the

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and government.