Scientist predict that all people will choose to talk the same global language in the future. Do you think this is positive or negative development?

The
position
of
women
has changed a great deal in many
societies
over the past 50 years. But these
societies
cannot claim to have achieved gender equality. To what extent do you agree or disagree? The place for females in
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society has been changed significantly during
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50 years in most
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gender inequality in most of these
countries
. I am agreeing
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around the world .in
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matter. With the development of the economy of the people around the world ,
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level of education
as well as the knowledge of the other
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, as well as the knowledge of the other societies,
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societies
had improved dramatically. Most
societies
learn to respect
women
as well as they had the advantage of learning. Since
then
, in most
countries
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women
came forward .
for example
, in most
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countries
like Bangladesh, Pakistan
women
had become
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part
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. And
also
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politics. In
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countries
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I have mentioned previously , produced many female political leaders.
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most of these
countries
still
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not
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the
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gender equality.
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desired
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position
for the
women
. There are many reasons for
this
matter ,but developing slam radicalism is a recognized reason.
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in Sri Lanka , there is
major
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position
for
women
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country
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less
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opportunities
for
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as well as for work. In summary,
although
in most nations
women
plying
major
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part in most aspects of
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society , still they not received the desired
position
. there are many reasons and examples for
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.
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