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Some people think that new houses should be built in the same style as older houses in an area. Others believe that local councils should allow people to choose different designs for their houses. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

#people #houses #style #area #councils #designs
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House is one of our basic needs. It should be comfortable because if
people
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 do not like the place they live they will feel uneasy. The community feel that in an
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 all the tower should be the same in
design
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, while others disagree and say the local Council should give permission to the public to select various designs for their
houses
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. I think
buildings
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 should be constructed to by new designs. To embark with, if
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 will be built with new model
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 will attract most, because everyone wants to live in a modern home.
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, new
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 building will have availability of new facilities
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 as lifts,parking space and so on.
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, new designs
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 will be equipped with high-quality equipment in the kitchen and toilets.
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, if the local Council allows the
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 to make new
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houses
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 the landlords can take high rent as they will provide quality opportunities. Over and above, in that kind of
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 security system are very strict. These
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 are monitored by CCTV cameras.
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, in my ,
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 there are several designed
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 year a new building was built.
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 house is very secure. No one can enter without permission.
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, some
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 think that all
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 should same in an
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 as it will look good. If it will happen
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 the tenant cannot compare with other
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 and the rent will be the same for all. Since the building will provide similar advantages, the renter will stay at the same house for a long time. In order to get less costing architecture sometimes
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 build the same
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houses
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, as the architecture cannot demand a higher amount of money from the landlord by giving excuses like he or she has worked hard for making new plans.
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, my neighbour's brother has built a new building as same as my neighbour by the same architecture and he did not have to pay more than his brother gave. In conclusion, I can say that in an
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 building should not look like same and if it will same the leaseholder will not get modern facilities.
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,
buildings
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 should be designed in a modern way.
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