Your share your room with another student in the college hostel. You find it very difficult to study there because he or she always has parties and friends visiting. Write a letter to the hostel warden complaining about your displeasure with the room mate.

Dear Mr Rahman, My name is Zannatul Firdaus, I am a
student
and leave in the college hostel. Today, I am writing
this
letter to inform you, that I am facing a very problem with my
studies
as my roommate is not cooperative. To embark with, at present I am leaving
room
number 005 and I share my
room
with another department
student
. I am a
student
of Master's final year.
In addition
, she is a
first
-year
student
and I do not think that she is serious enough about her
studies
. I did not even see her study for once.
Moreover
, she always does
such
a thing which make me annoyed and I cannot concentrate on my
studies
.
Furthermore
,
last
week she organised a party in our
room
and it hampers my
studies
. Over and above, every day her friends visit our
room
, I cannot even sleep well. Sometimes, she plays loud music on her phone as well. I want to say that she is really made my mind disturbed.
However
, I would like to say that, please give me the opportunity to shift to another
room
or you can shift her to a different
room
.
Otherwise
, you can tell her to stop
this
as my final exam is Knocking on my door.  I hope you will understand my situation and help me to overcome it. I will wait for your
further
action.  With regards, Zannatul Firdaus
Submitted by Zannatul Irin on

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