Letter inviting my childhood friend to visit Canada.

#childhood #friend #visit #canada

February 1, 2022 The

Visa

Officer Immigration, Refugees, and Citizenship

Canada

Govt. of

Canada

. LETTER OF INVITATION –

Ms.

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Nita

Gopalakrishnan

Nair

Dear Madam/Sir, Myself, Ami Rushi Ghadawala

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submitting herewith a Letter of Invitation in support of a Temporary Resident

Visa

(Visitor

Visa

) Application for my

childhood

friend

Ms.

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Nita

Gopalakrishnan

Nair

(Date of birth: December 08, 1983), to facilitate her temporary

visit

Canada

. I am a proud Canadian citizen, residing at 5, Morningmist St., Brampton, Ontario, L6R 2A5,

Canada

; with my husband Rushi Rakesh Ghadawala – who is

also

a proud Canadian citizen. I have been associated with TD

Canada

Trust

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for more than 15 years and presently working in

Private

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Banking division of TD

Canada

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. My husband is an aerospace professional, presently working with Magellan Aerospace – Winnipeg as Manager, Business Development. My household has four (04) members, including myself, my husband, and my in-laws. I have

been knowing

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Nita

Gopalakrishnan

Nair

over

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15 years, as we studied together in secondary school in India, and share a great bond of friendship with her.

Nita

Gopalakrishnan

Nair

is presently residing at 3480 Granada Ave., Apt 269, Santa Clara, CA,

USA

95051; and working as

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Systems Engineer with Etouch Systems Corp, located in Newark, California,

USA

. She is planning to

visit

us in

Canada

from March 1st, 2022 until March 30th 2022. I would like to invite my

childhood

friend

Nita

visit

me and my family in

Canada

, to cherish

childhood

memories and create many more during her stay. As she is

also

a working professional, during her vacation of four (04) weeks, she will be staying with us. Our house is a semi-detached house located in Brampton, ON, and is

comprising

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of 03 bedrooms, 03 Bathroom(s), a living room, a kitchen, and a basement; making it fully convenient to host both

Nita

comfortably during her

visit

. During her stay with us, we would like to show her our diversified vibrant culture and rich heritage of

Canada

and take her out to witness iconic Canadian sites, in person. She will be taking care of her all-

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expenses, which will be

evidential

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in her supporting documents for

this

application. As she is a full-time employee, working in the

USA

, she will leave

Canada

after her vacation, to resume her work in the

USA

This

Letter of Invitation provides the details regarding

this

proposed

visit

, with the assurance that the intention for the

visit

is entirely bona fide and that my

childhood

friend –

Nita

has every intention of returning to

USA

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to resume her work and leave

Canada

in accordance with the

visa

regulations. You have the fullest assurance from myself and my family, which you can please consider as a guarantee, that

this

is a request for a genuine, temporary

visit

and that we will abide by the terms of

temporary

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visa

issued and will conclude their

visit

successfully. Thank you for your

favorable

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consideration of

this

request, and

granting

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approval to

Ms.

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Nita

Gopalakrishnan

Nair

's application for

visitor

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visa

, so she can

fulfill

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our wish that she

has been

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given the opportunity to

visit

us in

Canada

. Sincerely,

Submitted by neetagopal on Wed Jan 12 2022

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