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Fast food is a part of life in some places. Some people think that this has bad effects on lifestyles and diet. Do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, there is no doubt that fast
food
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 has become a part of
life
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 for a
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people
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 all over the world.
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, it has certainly affected the lifestyles of many
people
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 all over the world. And from what I have seen, I agree that fast
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 has bad effects on lifestyles and
diet
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. In countries like the United States, fast
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 has caused a
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 of
obesity
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 cases in
children
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 and adults alike, which will lead to diseases that affect their lifestyle.
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, if a child is used to eating fast
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 since they are young, it is very likely that they will have an unhealthy
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 for the rest of their
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. I will try to explain
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 within
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 essay. As we can hear from the news in recent years,
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 rates have risen in the United States and fast
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 is one of the leading causes of
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 it is probably different in many other countries, I believe it could become a problem in the future if fast
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 consumption increases. As we know,
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 with
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 commonly suffer from a
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 of diseases.
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 diseases are heart disease, diabetes, and many others.
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, it is clear to me that a lifestyle of eating fast
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 is bad for
people
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. A child that has a habit of eating junk
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 since they are young, will eventually eat a
lot
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 of it throughout their
life
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. And I think it is not too far fetched of an idea that
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 is likely. We can see that a
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lot
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children
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 will prefer tasty foods rather than healthy foods. Which leads to a habit. And an unhealthy
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 like
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 will very likely lead to
obesity
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. And returning to my
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 point,
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 unhealthy lifestyle is bad for
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 that are growing up. To conclude my points, eating a
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 of fast
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 will have bad effects on
people
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 in general. A
diet
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 of eating fast
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 is not good for
children
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 or adults alike. For
children
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,
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 could cause an addiction that will become a habit and as they grew older they probably will have
obesity
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. And
people
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 with
obesity
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, are usually having problems with their health in their
life
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.
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