in some areas of US, a 'curfew' is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. what is your opinion about this?

Nowadays, there are some territories in the USA where young teens are not welcomed out of their homes at night

time

Use synonyms

but it is acceptable to be with an adult at

this

Linking Words

time

Use synonyms

. In my opinion, these days, the

crime

Use synonyms

rate is increasingly rising up in some areas of

this

Linking Words

country.

Therefore

Linking Words

, government committees have to constrain some young citizens within prescribed limits.

First

Linking Words

of all, the population of America is greatly huge which brings detrimental issues

such

Linking Words

as

crime

Use synonyms

and

this

Linking Words

is

one

Use synonyms

of the main problems in

this

Linking Words

developed country.

Thus

Linking Words

, it is said that all teenagers should stay at their homes while midnight

time

Use synonyms

in

order

Use synonyms

to decrease the

crime

Use synonyms

rate. It is

also

Linking Words

believed that if the officials do not set up

this

Linking Words

kind of restriction

such

Linking Words

as curfew, there will be some youngsters who may behave themselves not properly in many ways.

For example

Linking Words

, there is a fact that

one

Use synonyms

out of six teenagers goes to prison in the USA because of violation.

Therefore

Linking Words

, in

order

Use synonyms

to protect teens, all officials bring new rules which limit their moves at night.

Second

Linking Words

of all, there is only

one

Use synonyms

way to grow up youngsters in the right direction and

this

Linking Words

is by restricting them.

Furthermore

Linking Words

, even after becoming an

adult

Add a comma

,adult

show examples

too many people's behaviour is not acceptable and I believe that it is caused by a lack of education at schools which in turn make some of them susceptible to committing the

crime

Use synonyms

.

Thus

Linking Words

, officials should not only set restrictions by announcing a curfew but

also

Linking Words

work cooperatively with other members of society

such

Linking Words

as teachers in

order

Use synonyms

to reduce the consequences of lawlessness. In conclusion, the USA is

one

Use synonyms

of the best countries in the world despite

this

Linking Words

fact there are some regions where young teens are not allowed to go out at night

time

Use synonyms

because of restrictions. My viewpoint is that the public should be restricted if only they break the rules and if

this

Linking Words

happens a curfew should be set in

order

Use synonyms

to decrease violations.