You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic. The only way to reduce the amount of traffic in cities today is by reducing the need for people to travel from home for work, education or shopping. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

Arguably, it is commented that the unique and effective measure to shrink traffic congestion these days in cities is the diminishing of individuals' necessities in

trip

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trips

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,

job

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jobs

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, schooling or purchasing items in bazaars or

supermarket

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supermarkets

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. Personally, I strongly disagree with the view since the ruling power should enhance public facilities.

Although

shortfall of financial resources hinders willpower.

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essay will shed light on both sides of the view and provide evidence to prove the arguments. On the one hand, local authorities should build more public expressways.

In other words

, more alternative streets are needed to respond to today's demand. 70% of narrow roads existing today in

Brasil

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Brazil

were made 50 years ago, it is pointed out by the recent investigation done by the local press

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.

As a result

, the number of cars has soared causing traffic congestion.

Moreover

, it is the prime reason for

vehicles

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accidents in many nations throughout the earth.

On the other hand

, the shortfall of finances hampers

roads

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renovation. Because of

lack

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of budget, the local ruling power does not extend the number of ways to

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the demand.

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,

last

year Florida University's investigation showcased that approximately four-fifths of the

Africa

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African

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government does not have money for

streets

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maintenance.

Hence

, the overwhelming majority of the local roads are arterials and bumpy resulting in a plethora of street issues. In conclusion, notwithstanding money issues being the overriding reason for

lack

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the lack

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of progress in a myriad of regions, the local cabinets should escalate public expressways and autobahns to tackle the problem.

Therefore

, I still strongly disagree with the view.