Some believe that people today have no interest in maintaining the traditional culture of their country or region. Others believe that it is still important to people that we preserve a traditional way of life. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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modern
world now many lose
interests
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to follow their own traditional way, while still some
holding
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hope to
safe
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the culture for
future
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the future
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generation
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.
However
, in
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busy life many
not
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fail to carry forward the grades practice that followed by our
grandparent
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, and
also
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