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Social media marketing can influence what consumers buy

#media #influence #consumers
It is argued that social
media
 marketing can manipulate and influence
people
 to buy items that they want us to buy.
This
 essay totally agrees with the statement. I believe that social
media
 knows how to advertise certain products to make
people
 interested in buying that product. And somehow knows what we have been interested in. Social
media
 marketing
manipulate
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people
 into buying things they might not even need. How that works is- social
media
 can promote a certain
item
 many times and
people
 end up remembering that
item
 so they become interested in it. And eventually decide to check that
item
 out .
Fore
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For
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 example once I was going through my
instagram
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Instagram
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 and I came upon an ad that was promoting an
item
.L that I never would have imagined having. But
eventually
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 I ended up buying it because I became interested in it after seeing it so many times. Another reason for me to agree with the statement is that racial
media
 knows exactly what you have been interested in these days. An example that I can give is- one time I was outside hanging out with my friend and we started talking about a famous brand that we all very much like. Keep in mind that I have never seen an ad about
this
 brand
in
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 my social
media
 before. But after me stunning that
brands
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 name a couple of times with my friends. My social
media
 was full of ads only of that exact brand. And I wasn’t the only one, my friends said the same thing about theirs. In
conclusion
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 social
media
 is a big part of our
live
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 and it can influence us about many things. Not just about what we buy. It influences our personalities as well.
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