In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

In some parts of the world, the elders

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the youngsters that they can attain any

goals

when they

work

hard for them. The given message can be beneficial in certain situations, but there can be drawbacks to some people.

Children

will be motivated to try their best when they are told that putting all effort

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work

can obtain success.As a consequence, they will take things seriously and regard that every contribution matters in order to meet their aims and

goals

. They will set big targets or

goals

and devote time as well as action to strive to the fullest. Take the current

children

in schools as an example, they are taught by their parents that they have to be hard-working students if they are willing to excel in their studies.

As a result

,

children

put tremendous effort

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studying their lessons so that they can pass the exam with

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flying

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.

Furthermore

, they will be more confident and have self-esteem after doing

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rigorous preparation for the test.

Thus

, students will dare to take to challenges and aim for the achievements which they want to

be obtain

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as they

are being encourages

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that everything is possible through hard

work

.

On the other hand

,

this

message ignores some of the factors that are essential in achieving

goals

. Working hard is not a solution to reach the

goals

that people set for; some factors

such

as strategy and direction should be considered. As an example,according to one study, students who failed the exams ;

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are studying regularly is not because of their less contribution, but due to the wrong strategy or method that they are associated with.

As a result

,

children

will be depressed and less enthusiastic to continue their studies if the reality does not turn out the way they are told to.

Therefore

, it is crucial to guideline several important factors to

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fulfill

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the

children

's wishes and dreams so the youngsters will be on the right track. To conclude, it is the most common belief that has been passed on

youngsters

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that hard

work

can lead to success in life;

however

, it cannot be always related to most people as other contributing sectors to success

such

as strategies and methods are required to be applied.