Many doctors recommend that older people exercise regularly, but most patients do not follow any exercise routine. Why do you think it is happening? How can people be encouraged to exercise regularly?

Exercise has a great impact on human health, particularly in elderly ages.
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routine physical activity by the doctors.
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, the majority of them do not work out frequently.
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the possible approaches to convince
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to take part in different
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, having physical activity is a habit, which cannot be followed by old
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who are not used to it. To put it more simply, a minority of
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can change their lifestyle in elderly ages, so old person who did not follow a workout routine finds it difficult to start exercising.
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, my grandfather was recommended to walk for a mile daily.
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his sedentary lifestyle during his adulthood.
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grandmother easily followed the doctor's prescription for exercising because of her habit of keeping fit. A major step that can be taken to motivate
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out is providing more facilities. To illustrate, facilitated
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, pools, and
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courts may be an encouragement for residents to participate in diverse
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. In my
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,
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, citizens had to commute a long way
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gyms
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,
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, no one felt like engaging in
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. But, after the construction of the
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free
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machines, most of the residents
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used to physical activity.
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, following an exercise routine is a difficulty for older
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, which is associated with their lifestyle. To address
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issue and convince
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to work out, many measures can be taken, including building more
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and improving the
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facilities.

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