‘Everybody should donate a fixed amount of their income to support charity.’ How far do you share this viewpoint?
There is an idea that
people
ought to give some part of their income Use synonyms
for
Change preposition
to
the
Correct article usage
apply
charity
. I agree that Use synonyms
people
may donate to Use synonyms
charity
, Use synonyms
however
not everyone should do it, and I will explain why in Linking Words
this
essay. Linking Words
Firstly
, even for worthy causes the donation should be Linking Words
voluntarily
not by regulation. Everyone has the right to spend their own money Change the word
voluntary
however
they like, it can Linking Words
be include
donating Change the verb form
include
for
Change preposition
to
charity
or buying something else. Forcing Use synonyms
people
to donate is equal to what formal taxes do. A second negative factor is related Use synonyms
with
financial Change preposition
to
problem
. Most Fix the agreement mistake
problems
of
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apply
Use synonyms
people
can’t provide their Add an article
the people
ever rising
use by their salaries and, nothing is left behind Add a hyphen
ever-rising
it
for donating. Correct pronoun usage
apply
For example
, Linking Words
in
many countries face inflation during the pandemic Change preposition
apply
it
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which
result
Verb problem
affects
to
everyone in their life directly. These reasons impact Change preposition
apply
increasing
amount of Add an article
the increasing
people
who need support Use synonyms
while
reducing givers. Admittedly, donating in fact has many positives related to the individual and the community. Contributing Linking Words
on
consistently Change preposition
apply
in
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to
a
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apply
charity
leads to open opportunities for Use synonyms
individual
Add an article
an individual
the individual
such
as those who need their help and for Linking Words
charity
institutions to Use synonyms
extent
their support to the poor. There is another positive aspect experience more pleasure. It appears that donating money will lead to a Replace the word
extend
high
contented frame of mind. Replace the word
highly
For example
, some Linking Words
people
Use synonyms
concern
about the poor more than themselves and they always want to give doesn’t matter what they Wrong verb form
are concerned
left
. Wrong verb form
leave
To conclude
, it seems to me that if the financial assistance were to be compulsory, the Linking Words
donators
would be discontented and the nature of donation as a voluntary act would be under question.Correct your spelling
donors
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.
A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
Stick to this essay structure:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion