Some countries today have passed laws against smoking tobacco in public buildings such as offices and restaurants. Other countries have no intention of doing this. Consider the possible arguments on both sides of this debate, and reach your own conclusion on which side you favor.

On the one hand, those who use smoking
tobacco
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idea. They may
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cite the various benefits
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smoking
such
as
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aspect of smoking is reducing the possibility of obesity etc. Another main argument is the emotional support that smoker receives from cigarettes, meaning that they feel relaxed and
thus
more calm.
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, supporters of reducing cigarettes in public
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accept
this
regulation.
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number of believable
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people having morality, where smoking may be considered disgusting
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.
Besides
from good aspects, there are many disadvantages stemming from cigarettes
such
as lung cancer, cardiovascular disease, and asthma.
Moreover
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various
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of
tobacco
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is more harmful than breathing polluted air. From
this
,
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would probably suffer from that impact, meaning that it would be unfair to keep it going.
Finally
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smokers and nonsmokers should respect the
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of each other.
To conclude
, having
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against smoking
tobacco
in public
building
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such
as
restaurant
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restaurants
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and offices seems to be convenient for society as it is
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solution. It would seem that
this
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and
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or others.
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