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Some people feel that boarding schools (where students or pupils live at the school during the term) are an excellent option for children, while other people disagree for a number of reasons. Consider both sides of this debate and reach a conclusion.

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parents
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 more difficult choices. Most people agree that living in a dormitory has considerable benefits;
nevertheless
, there are valid opinions on both sides.
This
 essay will discuss the debate, and give a concluding view. On the one hand, those who support
dormitory
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dormitories
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 point out
to
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 the cost involving electricity, water, and
a
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heat is cheaper than
living-off
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living off
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 campus. Because not all parents (guardians) are in
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same financial situations,
which
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they
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 can afford issues
range
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 from accommodation to transportation. Examples can be seen in underdeveloped countries, where their monthly incomes
are
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barely cover daily expenses,
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has
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 numerous boarding schools.
Furthermore
, some people feel that students can make effortlessly new friends at once, which helps them to adapt
new
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environment
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. When the surroundings are changed suddenly, it becomes a tension, and inconvenience for a child.
On the other hand
, opponents of
this
 view highlight the restriction of freedom when someone lives in
such
 places. In
dormitory
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the dormitory
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, there are various rules for pupils must follow;
besides
, other tenants could bother
such
 issues as parties, noise, games, etc.
Secondly
, it is often said that living with others lessens one’s privacy, and there is always
unconstrained
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 conversation about others among peers of the same age.
This
 means that the child feels more insecure and depressed.
For instance
, during
the
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puberty,
adolescences
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 become more sensitive and intense. When they share
same
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 bathroom, teens could mock each other’s changes. In conclusion, I tend to agree that living outside of the campus is advisable regarding privilege, convenience, and calmness.
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs

The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.

A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).

Stick to this essay structure:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion

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