Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

It is believed that
music
can make
people
from different backgrounds and generations closer.
This
essay agrees that
music
is one of the most useful instruments to understanding each other and finding we share common.
Music
can bring
people
together by reminding us that we all are human beings with our successes and failures. Since discrimination is caused because
people
do not know each other, showing common feelings, beliefs, and thoughts can help us to know others.
For example
, all love songs can be listened to by heartbroken lovers without looking at their cultural backgrounds, and it can help to create connections. Another positive effect of
music
is becoming a bridge between different generations. A song was listened to by
parents
in their teenage ages, can be listened to by their
children
.
Therefore
, it can help
parents
to communicate with their
children
.
Moreover
,
parents
can learn
children
's tastes and follow their favourite singers, so
this
can be a way to find something to share.
For instance
, all pedagogs suggest
parents
share their
children
's hobbies to create strong links. I conclusion,
music
can help create connections between
people
by making them closer. Xenophobia and the gap between generations can be overcome via the healing effects of
music
.
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