Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers, whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in the education of children. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.

Some argue that parents who send their children to private schools should be exempted from paying tax for state education. I,
however
, disagree with
this
​proposed policy. For a variety of reasons, it would be wrong to reduce taxes for families who pay for
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.
First
, it would be difficult to calculate the correct amount
oftax
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of tax
tax

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 reduction for each family. In fact, more staff should be required to
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 complex
process
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and some major modifications to the
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 policies need to be made if necessary, leading to challenges in management.
Second
, the governments do not force parents to send their offspring to
privateschools
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private schools

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.
As a result
, affluent citizens will willingly accept a higher tuition fee if they desire to equip their children with a high-
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.
Furthermore
, the money collected through
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 would bring considerable long-term benefits.
First
, it is beneficial for all members of society to have a high-
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quality education

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 system.
This
 will result in a well-educated workforce and in turn a productive and prosperous nation.
In addition
, parents of children in
privateschools
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private schools

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mayalso
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 see the advantages of high-
qualityeducation
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 in their lives.
For example
, a company owner will need well-qualified and competent staff, and a well-funded schooling system can
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 employees. In conclusion, paying taxes to support
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 is considered appropriate to build a strong and sustainable nation.
Consequently
, all wealthy families should be happy to pay their share of the money
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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 250 words in writing task 2. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long essay will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.

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