Ensuring that children have regular physical exercise should be the responsibility of parents and therefore schools should not waste valuable school time having sports lessons as part of the curriculum. To what extent do you agree.

The quality of education in school has increased over the years. The debate is going on for a long on who is more responsible for the fitness of

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essay, I am going to discuss how obesity is affecting us, how

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both are responsible for the physical

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why I disagree with

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not wasting their valuable time having

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lessons. Over the years, obesity has increased quite a lot. With all that food chains and ready to eat packets, we are moving towards more and more diseases in our bodies. Diabetes and other sugar-related problems are on the rise. Once a wise man said, "Your true wealth is your health". It really resonates with me. Is our health worth sacrificing for education? Both

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and

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are responsible for the physical and mental health of the upcoming generation. The newer generation of

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lacks awareness about the advantages of a fit body and regular

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aware of the benefits of

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, I believe

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should have at least 2 classes each week where students must perform an

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for an hour or play some sport. In Asia, it is common for the

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to ask the

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to study for long hours

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of out playing or hanging out with their friends. So sometimes

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neglect the physical

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of the

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because of studies. That's where

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come into play.

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are active physically and play some

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, it increases their brain function and hand-eye coordination. Apart from that, they

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learn sportsmanship. Physical

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has both mental and physical benefits. To summarise, If

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are restricted from the

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looks forward to coming to school and enjoying physical

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already have so much on their plate regarding studies, by adding some

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class or letting our

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play in the fresh air, we make sure our

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are not stressed.