You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic. Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on your children. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

This

is a world of technology. With technology comes lots of dangers and disadvantages. When we say technology, the

first

thing that strikes everyone's mind is

computer

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the computer

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, which has almost become a family member in every family. It mainly attracts

children

because of quite many reasons which is a curse for them. I support

this

by

elobarting

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elaborating

using examples in the

next

paragraphs. These days we can see a house without many basic things but definitely not without

computer

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a computer

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. It may be because of

parents

wanting their

children

to get familiar with it as early as possible or

children

forcing their

parents

for playing video

games

,

watching

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watch

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movies etc. Whatever may be the reason,

computers

are the culprits that

has

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have

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increased distance between

parents

and

children

or

grand

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grandparents

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parents

and kids or between friends or between many other relations by keeping

every one

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everyone

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busy. We used to see

children

crying for their

parents

to take them to

park

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the park

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for playing or asking their

parents

for permission to play with their friends outside. But these days it has completely reversed. Even though

parents

beg their

childern

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children

to play outside or ask them to come to

park

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the park

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with them, they won't go, which is due to attracting video

games

on

computers

. Computer video

games

has

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have

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completely replaced outdoor

games

of

children

which indeed has decreased the physical strength and immunity power of

children

. Not only that

,

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but,

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it

also

affects

children

's eyes with its

refelction

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reflection

of blue light. If we go

any where

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anywhere

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we see people always carrying their laptops with them. Whether it may be a social gathering, family party, birthday, death day or a

marraige

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marriage

, people never visit without laptops or mobile phones.

This

reduces the

face

to

face

communication

between people which increases the gap.

This

is one of the main reasons why present

children

doesn't

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don't

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know much about

about

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apply

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their relatives and friends. To

conlcude

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conclude

,

computers

affect

children

physically. It

also

affects mentally by making

children

shy to communicate with others

face

to

face

as it replaces direct

communication

with indirect

communication

by providing online platforms for

communication

. So, allow

children

to use

computers

only when required to nourish them physically and mentally healthy.