All cars that burn fossil fuels should be banned and electric cars should replace them.
I strongly believe that fossil fuels should be banned because of the
emission
of CO2 and global warming issues.One of the solution
to avoid irreversible global changes is to develop our transport to be completely electric.
Fossil fuels lead to dramatic world Fix the agreement mistake
solutions
crisis
in the future. due to burning these planet Fix the agreement mistake
crises
resources
we have to face Add a comma
,resources
an upcoming global warming problems
. Correct the article-noun agreement
upcoming global warming problems
an upcoming global warming problem
This
is because of the emission
of carbon dioxide and other toxic fumes created by cars. Recent studies has
shown the Change the verb form
have
emission
of Co2 over the past few decades has grown rapidly and it’s constantly expanding due to a
transport usage. Correct article usage
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For
example
we produce over one million more carbon per year than back in Add a comma
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the
1978 which is crucial to the health of a planet. It’s Change the article
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also
true that if we don’t reduce emission
by the end of Fix the agreement mistake
emissions
a
current decade we’ll be living in Correct article usage
the
the
different world on an overheated planet fulfilling our lungs with Correct article usage
a
a
dirty air.
We can’t deny the fact that electric cars are more Remove the article
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environmental
friendly. Change the adjective
environmentally
This
is because of their autonomic electrical battery usage. With that in mind
gas Add a comma
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emission
is reduced to zero. For
example
Elon Musk’s Tesla company declared that their batteries are fully recyclable and changeable which extend the life of a car which means Add a comma
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less
resources will be wasted in Change the quantifier
fewer
environment
.
In Add an article
the environment
conclusion
to stop the progressive climate Add a comma
,conclusion
changes
all fuel engines need to be regulated to use, forbidden and replaced by electric cars. In my Add a comma
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opinion
there’s so much more that can be done in case of Add a comma
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global
crisis. Correct article usage
a global
However
, burning fossil fuels is still one of the main global issues to consider of
in our modern living era.Change preposition
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