All cars that burn fossil fuels should be banned and electric cars should replace them.

I strongly believe that fossil fuels should be banned because of the
emission
of CO2 and global warming issues.One of the
solution
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to avoid irreversible global changes is to develop our transport to be completely electric. Fossil fuels lead to dramatic world
crisis
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crises

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in the future. due to burning these planet
resources
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,resources

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we have to face
an upcoming global warming problems
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upcoming global warming problems
an upcoming global warming problem

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.
This
is because of the
emission
of carbon dioxide and other toxic fumes created by cars. Recent studies
has
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have

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shown the
emission
of Co2 over the past few decades has grown rapidly and it’s constantly expanding due to
a
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transport usage.
For
example
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,example

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we produce over one million more carbon per year than back in
the
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1978 which is crucial to the health of a planet. It’s
also
true that if we don’t reduce
emission
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emissions

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by the end of
a
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the

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current decade we’ll be living in
the
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a

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different world on an overheated planet fulfilling our lungs with
a
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dirty air. We can’t deny the fact that electric cars are more
environmental
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environmentally

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friendly.
This
is because of their autonomic electrical battery usage. With that in
mind
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,mind

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gas
emission
is reduced to zero.
For
example
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,example

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Elon Musk’s Tesla company declared that their batteries are fully recyclable and changeable which extend the life of a car which means
less
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fewer

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resources will be wasted in
environment
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the environment

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. In
conclusion
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to stop the progressive climate
changes
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,changes

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all fuel engines need to be regulated to use, forbidden and replaced by electric cars. In my
opinion
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,opinion

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there’s so much more that can be done in case of
global
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a global

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crisis.
However
, burning fossil fuels is still one of the main global issues to consider
of
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in our modern living era.
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