The apartment that you have rented was repaired recently. Later you discovered some defects in repairs. Write a letter to your landlord; In your letter. Explain what the problem is Suggest how it can be fixed Say what you would like the landlord to do about it.

Dear Mr Smith, I’m one of your tenants living at Room 123 Building A, City Condo. I hope you are doing well and staying safe. I’m grateful that you are taking care of the maintenance of the room every 6 months and providing good facilities for me. I’m writing
this
letter to inform you that the repairman you sent yesterday didn't fix the broken window property carefully, and now I cannot open the sliding window because I think something is stuck in it the sidling window. I should have checked before he left but I was busy with some urgent work. It'd be good if you can send another repairman to fix it as soon as possible because my room is full of musty and I cannot sleep. I'll be available
this
week. Please and let me know in advance when a repairman will come.
This
time, I'll make sure that it works before he leaves. Thank you for your consideration. Yours Sincerely,
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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