You and some friends ata a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a speacial occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and service. Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter Give details of your visit to the restaurant Expain the reason for the celebration Say what was food about the food and the service
Dear Sir or Madam,
I trust you are doing well. The purpose of
this
letter is to express my gratitude for the amazing food and exceptional service that I received.
First and foremost, I had Linking Words
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dinner with a few of my friends at your restaurant on the 29th of March.
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In addition
, we all were celebrating one of our friend Dhruvi's 25th birthday on that day and your restaurant Linking Words
has
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such
an unforgettable experience for personally myself and all of my friends.
During our visit, we ordered many Indian and Italian dishes which were all exceptionally well cooked and the best part was Linking Words
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Besides
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a dance
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was
also
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Last
but not least, the staff was very polite, calm and Linking Words
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I hope that you continue to make Replace the word
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mouthwatering food and provide an excellent service in the future as well.
Thank you.
Yours faithfully,
Ruchin PatelCorrect article usage
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Consider starting your letter with a brief introduction of yourself or your relationship to the restaurant to create a more personal tone.
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Separate different ideas into distinct paragraphs to enhance clarity for the reader.
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The letter effectively conveys gratitude and satisfaction with both food and service, ensuring the purpose of writing is clearly addressed.
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The greeting and closing are appropriately formal, enhancing the tone of the letter.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite