It is becoming increasingly popular to have a year off between the finishing school and going to the University. What are advantages and disadvantage?

Over the
last
two or three decades,
students
have been going to universities tremendously than ever before due to
the
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globalisation. It is an often argued issue whether
students
should be taken a
year
gap
between
the
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completing
school
and
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gong
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to
the
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college
, or not.
However
,
this
essay discusses it briefly for the
benefits
and drawbacks following reasons.
To begin
with, there are many
benefits
to taking a
year
gap
between
this
. One of the major advantages is that
pupils
can save more money from any work, and
thus
, they can pay the
college
fees by
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earnings as well as savings too. Another advantage is that one
year
gap
between finishing
school
and going to
the
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higher studies can give more experience towards life
such
as
independent
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lifestyle, and
therefore
, many countries'
pupils
follow
this
trend
.
For example
, in Sri Lanka,
education
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system follows a
year
gap
between completing
school
and going to
the
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university;
as a result
,
theirs
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country
student
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students

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get more experience and they can save money for
theirs
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education.
Therefore
,
this
trend
has more
benefits
for
students
as well as parents.
In contrast
, there are some drawbacks to taking a
year
gap
between finishing
school
and
the
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university. One of the major disadvantages is that many
pupils
do not like to study continuously because they go to employment and settle
theirs
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life, and
therefore
, will not study
further
. Another
disadvantages
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is that sometimes
students
forget
to
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theirs
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academic syllabus due
a
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year
gap
,
this
can lead to forgetting all academic curriculum.
For instance
, a
recend
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report from the Times of Sri Lanka said that more than 60% of the
school
finishing
pupils
do not like to continue to theirs higher studies in
college
due to the
gap
between grade twelve and
college
like a
year
. To conclude, saving money and getting more life experience is the advantage of
this
trend
;
forgeting
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academic
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the academic

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syllabus and
unwilling
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to
further
study is the disadvantages.
However
, in my opinion, about
this
,
this
trend
has more drawbacks that outweigh the
benefits
.
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