Many old buildings are protected by law because they are part of a nation's history. However, some people think old buildings should be knocked down to make way for new ones because people need houses and offices. How important is it to maintain old buildings? Should history stand in the way of progress?

Because they are part of a country's history, many historic

structures

are legally protected. Some people,

however

, believe that existing

buildings

should be demolished to make space for new ones since people require homes and workplaces. I personally think that preserving historical

buildings

is important because of

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value of them and old

buildings

are

also

part of the

culture

of the city. On the one hand, preserving some historical

buildings

is crucial since they have so

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historical

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.

Buildings

with historical profit like

that is

a witness of many events that have happened throughout the building’s life.

For example

, the Temple of Literature in Ha Noi, Vietnam is a historical structure that was built in the year 1070 which was a school for the greatest students. Now, it is conserved and known as one of the greatest

structures

in Vietnam. As

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society is developing, cities are

also

improving with high-rise

buildings

, modern constructions. Preserving old

buildings

can

also

be maintaining the country’s

culture

which is important.

Thus

, the government encourages us to preserve historical

structures

as it is part of the nation’s

culture

.

Moreover

, along with the

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society and sky-high

buildings

, the mix of the old

culture

and modern civilization can be unique as people nowadays often look for

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. To be more exact, old historical

buildings

that have great chronicled values nowadays can be attractive to tourists. In conclusion, there is no question that preserving historic

structures

is critical.

However

, I do not feel that a minor modification will be detrimental. We must examine environmental changes and figure out how to adapt while maintaining the traces of our past.