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Your car insurance company has told you that they are going to increase the amount you have to pay in insurance for your car each month. You are not happy about this. Write a letter to your insurance company. In your letter explain Why you are writing to them Why you think the insurance should not be increased What you want them to do

#car #insurance #company #amount #month
Dear Sir, I am writing
this
 missive to express my dissatisfaction with the hike in the price of insurance premiums.
Although
,the
company
 is charging a hefty amount and now with
this
 ,increase it has become very difficult for a common person to survive. After looking at the premium of all other competitive insurance companies it is your
company
 who is charging almost.
Furthermore
,I consider it provides the best services in town but
on the other hand
,there are companies who are giving more coverage at less cost. It's my humble request to give some reduction in the premium amount as in
this
 pandemic earnings from the businesses are almost nill.
Also
,since I am a loyal customer of the
company
 and now it's been almost 20 years,
Moreover
,I am paying a regular premium to the
company
.
Besides
this
,if possible please provide to option to pay on annual basis. I hope to hear from you soon Yours faithfully, Harmar
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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