Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
A few citizens believe that building more
sports
facilities
is the best way to improve the
public Correct article usage
apply
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health
heath
. Correct your spelling
health
However
, another argue
that Replace the word
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this
would have a few impact
on public Change to a plural noun
impacts
heath
and that other measures and necessary . In my opinion , Correct your spelling
health
i
strongly agree with the Change the capitalization
I
first
idea that the new reform would brings
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bring
a lots
of benefits to the public Correct the article-noun agreement
a lot
lots
heath
and citys. Correct your spelling
health
This
essay will discuss boths
points of view.
About building more Correct your spelling
both
sports
facilities
is the hottest problem that a lots
of citizens argue . I don'Correct the article-noun agreement
a lot
lots
t
think the new sports
centres wouldn't
attractive
the Replace the word
attract
people
in the citys
. Correct your spelling
city
city's
Firstly
, at
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in
the
free Change the word
their
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time
times
they can come and try to train their body. Add a comma
,times
Although
it takes a lot of your time, the result you get is a healthy, strong and elegant body. Secondly
, going to the gym and exercising every day can help you stay healthy and reduce your risk of dangerous diseases. In the present life, to continue studying and working in harsh environments requires a great deal of stamina. So for the body to function well and perfect
at work according to me at least. We have to spend 30-40 minutes a day Add a missing verb
be perfect
to practice
. For that reason, building Change the verb form
practicing
sports
and wellness centers
is one of the strategies of cities to improve the quality of their companies and employees. Change the spelling
centres
Finally
, sports
centers
will Change the spelling
centres
also
be very attractive to young people
who are passionate about sports
. With an ideal space and a large number of professional mentors, young people
and school clubs will flock here with great frequency. The income of the center
will be outstanding and thrive in the Change the spelling
centre
area
, thereby leading to the propaganda of good health
in the surrounding area
.
On the other sides
, others argue that the construction of Fix the agreement mistake
side
facilities
, sports
and health
centers
will bring impacts on the Change the spelling
centres
people
and children in the area
. Some people
also
think that it is sluggish because it does not receive the attention of the people
in the area
, leading to bankruptcy when there is not enough money to maintain. I disagree with the above opinion for several reasons as follows. First
, I don't
think new constructions or companies won't
attract many visitors, it will be extremely impressive to everyone and people
in the area
. From there, there will be a lot of attention and research from people
coming to that place. Secondly
, the new sports
and public health
centers
or Change the spelling
centres
facilities
will be strongly approved and trusted by parents and the public because of its
specificity. Correct pronoun usage
their
Health
issues are always popular and healthy, for those who do not have time to exercise as well as care about their health
or are even lazy. These problems will be solved quickly and perfectly, without being fussy and expensive, but still ensuring everyone's health
.
In conlusion
, building the new Correct your spelling
conclusion
sports
àn heath
centres will help the community improve the special life and Correct your spelling
health
familys
. I Correct your spelling
family
hopes
that nowadays the Change the verb form
hope
people
can see the benefit of its
and continue to build and develop the general Correct pronoun usage
it
health
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