At present time the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults compared with the number of old people.
The countries give attention (tend) to the rate of young and old
people
to define the workforce and development of the future. In my opinion, the number of young adults has greater than the number of old Use synonyms
people
has pros Use synonyms
however
it has cons. Linking Words
Therefore
, I agree with some aspects of it.
The Linking Words
first
, a young person who is the main force to a work and moving for the population in a particular Linking Words
country
. When the researchers define the economic growth, they consider the percentage of availability to work Use synonyms
people
. One of the reasons, a younger generation pays income tax to the government, and the older generation only gets a pension from the government. Use synonyms
For instance
, the latest developed Linking Words
country
is South Korea that has involved so many foreign young workers in their own Use synonyms
country
to increase the economy for the Use synonyms
last
20 years. Linking Words
Finally
, they became one of the highly developed countries.
Linking Words
On the other hand
, the number of young adults is too large, which Linking Words
also
has cons. For the Linking Words
country
, when the workforce has been enough, all Use synonyms
people
have a job and making a profit is more difficult. Use synonyms
As a result
, an army without a job became too big . Linking Words
Furthermore
, they move to the poor ones. Afterwards, they want some subsistence like the older class.
In conclusion, young and middle-aged adults are more than aged Linking Words
people
in a nation, have advantages ,Use synonyms
however
it has disadvantages. Linking Words
Consequently
, the vision and strategy of that Linking Words
country
are more important.Use synonyms
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